Rejected Fallen Kingdom

[MinerBat]

Title: Fallen Kingdom
Author: MinerBat (based on song by captainsparklez)
Description: I used to rule the world, chuncks would load when i gave the word! One minute we had it all, next our world began to fall...

images:

http://imgur.com/a/hFau5lk

start: 79 32 34 on diamond

power ups on sponge:
79 35 45 on stair
79 55 90 on throne
79 61 71 first floor
79 61 71 second floor
96 61 87 eating room
76 68 94 hallway
92 75 81 on top of castle
38 62 79 bridge
11 77 73 balcony
38 32 51 open area
46 32 79 on pathway
26 35 14 in blacksmith
62 34 11 building under construction
11 34 34 market
14 32 60 mob cage
71 32 26 in the tavern
87 43 78 secret portal room

flood start and end:
31-53

download:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1XDVRXqNA5FaF2ycf7P_u4Cti0BpYG-Dz?usp=sharing

 

[Elitemaster5]

Hi Minerbat,

Thank you for your Disasters map submission. Unfortunately, we are going to have to reject your submission entirely. We understand that you were trying to base the map off of another build, but we prefer that you only take inspiration from the original build instead of trying to replicate it. The team has decided that your map is too close to the original CaptainSparklez build and is lacking originality.

I will list some general feedback we came up with below that you can apply to future builds:

• Too close to the original build, not enough uniqueness
  • We want to see your creations
• Village is too claustrophobic, buildings need more space inside and around
• Village rooftops are bland, needs details/texture
• Trees need to be more detailed
• The Shroomlight sticks in a circle around mid would need more detail
  • Are they lanterns or hunger games podiums?

Side note: I really like your library sign design :)

Once again, thank you for the submission. We look forward to seeing what you can come up with in the future!